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Para aprobar el curso se necesitan calificaciones aprobadas de tres áreas diferentes: 1. Asistencia (85% o más) 2. Trabajo en Clase (75% o más) 3. Exámenes (75% o más) Las calificaciones NO serán promediadas.

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 Writing Unit 9

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PostSubject: Writing Unit 9   Thu Feb 25, 2010 8:29 pm

WRITING

UNIT 9

•Make notes about the advantages and disadvantages of one of these topics. Then write a text similar to the one here, giving your own opinions.


Living in an apartment
(Rather than a house)
Living in an apartment and not in a house is very different, because if you living in an apartment you have a lot of advantages, like don’t worry about the stressful of paint your house or take care of plants and animals.
You also have a comfortable place for living and fast to go to somewhere or for go to work, with less responsibility. And more to me that I am a woman is much safer place, because have security 24 hours a day, and if I travel don’t worry to left my apartment alone.

The disadvantages of living in an apartment are that you can’t have a party with a lot of friends; the place is more expensive and small, like a box! And also you can’t forget that you cannot have pets there, so that is wrong for me because I love animals.

I prefer living in a house than in an apartment, because I feel more relaxed, comfortable, with my pets and with more space and freedom to do what you want.
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PostSubject: Re: Writing Unit 9   Wed Mar 10, 2010 8:09 pm

Gab´S wrote:
WRITING

UNIT 9

•Make notes about the advantages and disadvantages of one of these topics. Then write a text similar to the one here, giving your own opinions.


Living in an apartment
(Rather than a house)
Living in an apartment and not in a house is very different, because if you liveing in an apartment, you have a lot of advantages,. like You don’t worry about the stressful of painting your house or takeing care of plants and animals.
You also have a comfortable place for living to live and fast to go to somewhere or for go to work, with less responsibility What do you mean?. And more to me that I am a woman It is much safer place, because it has have security 24 hours a day, and if I travel, I don’t worry to left leave my apartment alone.

The disadvantages of living in an apartment are that you can’t have a party with a lot of friends;. tThe place is more expensive and small, like a box! And also you can’t forget that you cannot have pets there, so that is wrong for me, because I love animals.

I prefer living in a house than in an apartment, because I feel more relaxed, comfortable, with my pets and with more space and freedom to do what you I want.

Excellent! Try to write shorter sentences. Remember, one idea is one sentence. Long sentences can be confusing.

Cecy
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